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They say to expect the unexpected. Others say that we should let fate control our lives. 

To be honest....

I'm really not into that kind of stuff...

    Well until one day....I stepped into a small shop. It smelled a bit musty, and had that old antique feel to it. Yet....it gave off a very homely vibe. Sitting on an old rocking chair, and old woman. I watch as she rocks back and forth in her chair, knitting away as the sounds of the wind chimes and the creaking of the chair breaking the slience. Looking up from her work she gives a warm smile, as if she were greeting her grand children whom she hasn't seen in a long time. 

"Welcome dear. I don't have much but feel free to look around." She says, her voice sweet as honey. I smile back at her and nod. 

There wasn't a lot to look at in this quaint little shop of hers. Some old fashioned candy...a few post cards for the tourists and a pack of seeds for the spring season. What really caught my attention was a black bag that had a sign above it that read, 

"Let Fate be your guide to love"

"Oh that's quite popular with a lot of young girls your age." The old woman says, getting up from her chair. She grabs a really old looking cane as she walks over to me. "Go ahead and take one. It's free." she adds with a smile. 

"Oh um...I'm not into fate and all that mumbo jumbo.." I reply. "Thanks for the offer though." 

The old woman chuckled and shook her head. "Oh I insist. I hate to see someone leave empty handed. Consider it a gift as thanks for walking into my shop. Besides, you never know...you might change your mind about fate." she says, ushering me to reach into the bag. I sigh and give in, just to humor her. I might as well give this a chance. 

to be continued.....
This is one of the ideas I wrote in my notebook. I wanted to try and update for a bit though I'm going to be extra busy with school and work. Just leave a comment below who you want me to write the reader with first. 

Prussia- Part one: Link           

part two: TBA
Canada-part fav.me/d7c7zgr
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Derpalotderps Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Artist
Um... Romano?..... If it's ok with you.....
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babymama90 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I second Feliciano. If it's not too much trouble.
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:iconlittlerobin870:
LittleRobin870 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Japaaaaaan.......?
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DEATHLOVENOTES Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Male belarus? 😄😄😄
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:iconmarshalleeslover9:
Marshalleeslover9 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
SPAAAIIIIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icontwotailedfury:
twotailedfury Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Canada?Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Sho lovely) [V2] 
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:iconlinsasake:
LinsaSake Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Italy?? Norway, and Romania too please! Please 
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Norway and Romania? :iconbegplz:
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:iconawesomenekogirl:
AwesomeNekoGirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Can you please make Australia?
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:icon0lexdelapp:
0lexdelapp Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Make a Russia one! :la:
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tallflower Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Defiantly Germany
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Do America for me please?
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:iconphantomgirl17:
Phantomgirl17 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
Prussia!!!! *Puss in Boots eyes*
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
Part one is finished m'dear. 
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CheshireRose247 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
um would you be willing to do 2P England? you don't have to though i don't wanna bother you. :iconblushyplz:
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
I'm not that great with 2p england but I'll give it a try. I'm up for challenges >:3
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:icontheultimateotaku123:
TheUltimateOtaku123 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Could you also do normal England?
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:iconcheshirerose247:
CheshireRose247 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY! Thank you!
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:iconlunaveon:
Lunaveon Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Either Prussia or Scotland?
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
Prussia is finished though its part one. I'll do scotland too though 
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:iconclowcard123:
clowcard123 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
England or America or Spain if you can
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LightandDarkHeart Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Iceland or Norway!
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:iconsouleater12191:
souleater12191 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
norway iceland and finland please!
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:iconallthelittlewonders:
AllTheLittleWonders Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student General Artist
2p America, 2p England and 2p Canada please uvu
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SailorLuna101 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Hmm, either Canada, Iceland, or Sealand, please? If not Sealand (since he is young) then England..... //shotforaskingformultipleguys

I only asked a few in case a different character would be easier.....
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
sure but if I do sealand I'm either going to make him older or make the reader younger
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:iconsailorluna101:
SailorLuna101 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Up to you, I just like to give options for if something else might work a bit better. I hate being a bother to people.
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
ah no you're not a bother. Thanks for asking though
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:iconsailorluna101:
SailorLuna101 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
You're welcome.
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:iconjustaregulartomato:
justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
If you do 2ps! Can you please do 2p!Romano or 2p!Spain or 2p!Italy
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:iconashflames:
AshFlames Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
Sure I can do 2p
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:iconjustaregulartomato:
justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
Yay!
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annalrk Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Switzerland, please. I look forward to this, as it's very well written and seems very interesting. uwu
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guardianarchangel Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome
cant wait to see what happens next!
Can you write canada?
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YenBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Prussia! And please continue!
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:iconhetalover524:
hetalover524 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
do Poland!
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:iconendercat:
Endercat Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Lithuania or Austria, please. You're such a talented writer, I can't wait to see what you'll do!
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shannonturner Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Prussia. and this is awesome! :D
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Angeliquediabla Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
This is very intriguing....I hope you continue this. Not only is it well written, but it really makes the reader want more.
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eekoh472 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:meow: can't wait for more ^^
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